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#1 nick

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Posted 19 August 2011 - 02:39 PM

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"the formless void moves"

cold dense
blue notes
dodging sight
tonight's eye
blinking blinking
blinked twice
disappeared

it bumped in the night
turned the boogyman soft
vaporized
taking human life
with it
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Posted 19 August 2011 - 02:39 PM

"a formless victim"

cutting her hair off
because her boyfriend
cut himself off

heart pumping cold apathy

it snatched her house
and she didn't even notice
because she didn't even
give a fuck

her life before her eyes:
born, dying, died.

took a few hearts
with me at least

she was gone instantly
her bones a thin white powder
sprinkled into the atmosphere
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Posted 19 August 2011 - 02:39 PM

"a formless sighting"

it knew where it was going
we knew as much as the next man:
next to nothing

a dozen of our men
dead: their children bastards.
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Posted 19 August 2011 - 02:39 PM

"formless blood"

it sunk inside you
to where the blood
was blue & purple.

it mimicked your exhale
as it shimmered from your mouth.

it took your blood
with no purpose
other than
to fuck with you
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Posted 19 August 2011 - 02:40 PM

"a formless sighting #2"

i watched it dance
and control the night
flickering around like
a big, scared firefly

it purred
like a stray cat
guarding its alley

its hiss
a screech
singing my ear
canceled my hope

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"a formless sighting #3"

it ate the equivalent of
a 2000 calorie breakfast
in one sitting

it moved: nobody breathed

blood more shiny than 1000 diamonds
formed a lake in the road

i wish i knew what it wanted

if it wanted our leader
it came to the wrong place
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Posted 19 August 2011 - 02:40 PM

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"attack!"

it huffed & puffed
& bent metal brick stone
with its breath

confused soldiers
fighting something
that isn't even
really there

rockets
locked-on
red dots
misled by the commander
who knows they're all
dead meat anyway

- august '11
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Posted 19 August 2011 - 02:40 PM

"the formless void at sea"

lonely lil fisherman
lonely lil hat
out at sea way past
either of their bedtimes
floating, rocking;
bouncing--splash!

it held him under water
his points pressured
bubbled blue & pale

too small it figured
threw it back in the water

lonely lil fisherman
trying to find his lil hat

skipping stones off
a chunk of his former ship
whistling a cute melody
happy just to be here
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Posted 19 August 2011 - 04:01 PM

"the elderly discuss the void"

channel 4 news
volume on 10,000
pa licking the batteries
before putting them in (wrong)

ma took her third sip
from a empty coffee mug
looking to see if she spilled
something on her shirt

"the formless WHAT?"
"void? they must be talking about you, ma!"

ma gave him a look
w/ the devil in her eyes
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Posted 19 August 2011 - 04:03 PM

"canceled hope"

bouquets of fireworks
shrugged off
manmade missles vs
something out of this world

our chances a drawbridge
of stringy rope & wet twigs

kids sending s.o.s. paper planes
from window to window

it said goodbye
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Posted 19 August 2011 - 04:04 PM

maybe it came to kill god
or just bathe in a lake
to startle a sleeping world
thats better off awake
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Posted 23 August 2011 - 10:24 PM

this is gonna be a monster movie too and i wrote the tv pilot already



this shit here is just some collected poetical nonsense about it
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